Veins - Comments

Everything stopped spinning and he could hear his heartbeat in his ears, slow and unsteady, then without warning, everything fell silent, but not before he let a smile grace his lips.

The last couple lines gave me chills, but in a really good way. I think you did an extremely good job with how you wrote this. Like the way he continued to do drugs. Your description was perfect because I could envision everything so clearly. Such a sad one shot. Drugs are bad.. I think you know that, though.

Before I start rambling, I loved every word of this. It's definitely one of my favorite pieces of writing that I've ever read from you. Good job, my little hooker! XD

I really adored the River Phoenix comparison; but that's because I'm such a huge fan of him. Either way, I really loved it. Uhm, still pictured the same person in the same position I told you about earlier. The way he kept going with the drugs was good; I think. I liked the ending, even if it was a bit sad.

yeah, so here we are.
a nice comment on the shot that I really liked.

xx