Wearing Nothing but a Little Smirk - Comments

I loved this chapter so much! Amazing. It was one of my favorites in this story. I loved it. Tyler is so amazing to her. I thought that Brent was going to be good for a minute there, but I guess not.

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Well, I hate to be the one to say it, but Brent had a point. He has a lot to worry about, he has to provide for his family and I don't really think Roxy gets that. I mean, she definitely needs help getting over her past in order to move forward with her life. I'm not exactly sure if Tyler can give her the help she needs. I mean, yeah, everybody has their baggage and shit, but I don't know. Maybe you'll prove me wrong.
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It sounds like this tour should have never happened. There's so much drama surrounding Roxy. It's just one thing after another at this point! Man, I hope she can figure out what's what in her life and move on... she's so dramatic about everything!

First of all, Madison, you spelled scum wrong. It's spelled with a 'c' not a 'k'. LOL.

I do not hate it at all! It was very drama filled.
You know i love drama.
LOL
Brent, dude, what is his deal? I mean, is he still tore up about Travis leaving? GET OVER IT, DOUCHE LORD! lol
I feel so inadequate. You and Madison both wrote serious amazing chapters, my chapter for Heroes seems wimpy in comparison. haha.
I loved it. More soon?

OMG, whats happening?! Is she gonna be ok? I knew something was gonna happen when she was talking about those pills, I just knew it! OMG. She has to be alright. That would be awful. Brent was such a fucking douche bag asshole, skum sucker! He deserved to get hit in the face. I think he's worse than Travis, honestly. Great chapter. You need to update soon, so I know what the fuck is going on! I love you!

Can't wait for the next update!
This chapter was fucking awesome!
<3

Aw, miscarriages suck. Seriously, it's no fun at all. I hope what Travis revealed about the past doesn't come true! That'd be awful!
Thank god they cancelled the show! She needs to rest! Jeez!

Awesome chapter! Travis almost seemed human at the end. I kind of liked that. I've been waiting for him to act like he actually cared about something, anything really. LOL.

I'm glad that she finally let him cancel the show. She did not need to go out in front of a bunch of people in that state of mind. How awful.

I don't hate you. I mean, I didn't know she was pregnant. If I had known, I might have hated you, though. J/K. ;)

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Awesome chapter. You can tell she's a lot more upset than she's letting on. I loved the part where I think it was Joe, was telling her bandmates to treat her better. That was good. It was sad that she had a miscarriage. I wasn't expecting that, but it was really good. Well, not good, but yeah. You know what I mean. haha. Ok, I'm going to bed. I loved the chapter. More soon?

Lovely!!! Sex on the bus and the bus driver running out was my favorite part!! Not really, my favorite part was the whole thing! :D Mostly because it was filled with sexual tension! Lots of it! More soon?

I loved this chapter!
I'm glad she made up with Brent. She needs to be in good with her band, even if it was him that was being the asshole
Lzzy's outfits are amazing!
Maybe I should have left my bra off for this chapter, huh? LMFAO!
I agree with Bonesie, this chapter had a lot of sexual tension in it.
And it had a really great ending.
That part with the band was funny, after they got off stage. :)
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Yay! I liked this chapter a lot! Lots of sex! lol. There has always been so much sexual tension between them and this chapter was a good little expression of that. Hmm, I know you're waiting for me to get on IM so I'll make this quick. I loved the chapter a lot. It was great, even if it was a filler. More soon! Oh, and I love Lzzy's outfit! I love all of her outfits. She's amazing! lol.

What the fuck, dude? What is with all of the fucking douche lords in her band? UGH! Men! lol.
I loved when she had her little bitch fit at that guy, that was great. She needed to grow some balls with some of those dudes.
Yay! She got a bass player.
And, yay, Tyler's awesome! lol.
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Great chapter. It was a good little filler and I feel like Roxy did have a breakthrough and it's about damn time! lol. I loved it. I'm glad Tyler got her a bass player. Can't wait for more. This comment sucks bananas, but you know I loved it so yeah. haha. Love you doll!

Nice! It's a great filler! :D
I'm glad Tyler was able to find a replacement for Travis so fast! He's such a great boyfriend! And it sucks that she misses Travis... :(
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i love it . point blank period ! Roxy is a very strong girl , after what shes been though , and the way her brother and ex bestfriend treats her , i can say she held her ground by standing up to them ! Tyler is fucking awesome ! its a great story !

Ok,I loved the whole thing. The part with his bandmates was hilarious. It was nice of him to let her ride with him. What is she gonna do about the bass player thing? That should be interesting. I loved the whole chapter. I love how they live in world where fucking outside the bus is normal. lol. More soon!! I love you!

“Look at him, not a hair out of place,” I loved that line. I seriously cracked up when I read that! I actually loved all of the parts with his bandmates.

Great chapter. I agree with what DP2007 said. I think they need to work stuff out, but I think that its good that they take a break from each other. Maybe Travis can figure out what his issues are, and Roxy can figure out hers. Because she obviously has some kind of issues if she's OK with him hitting her and treating her like shit all the time.

I loved it. More soon? I want to know what she's gonna do about getting a new bass player.

Cute ending! I love it!
I do think Roxy has a big trust issue with every man out there. I definitely can't blame her, she has a right to not trust any one after what happened to her. I just hope she can have some closure and peace with Travis because let's face it, disagreements with siblings suck more than anything in the world. Siblings are supposed to be a joy and a bit of an annoyance, but still, a joy. They're supposed to be each other's friends and most importantly their family. They have each other as family and that's all they have left for family, is themselves. They need to work things out!

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Sounds like Roxy and Travis need some family counciling.. Seriously! How are they ever going to make it through a tour with all of that shit hanging above their heads!? They need help, dude. Seriously, it's up to them now if they want a brother/sister relationship that's functional.