KISS THE GIRL!! Sha-la-la-la-la-la! Gah, Jamie would punch me if I sang that to him, eh? Hehe. Hummdeedumdum. I like your random updates, whenever they come I love them! ... I hope Jamie kisses Vicky! Or does something really smooth and like, reaches around her for his smokes or somethin'. I can't wait to see what happens! =D
lol! You are so cute! 'First time I've used profanities in my writing'- hehehe i love ya, Haylz. I thought the swearing and the frustration came across really well. It totally made sense with Jamie's character! =D And Victoria hugged him!!! And then I loved how she denied that that's what she intended! Hehe. I see right through her. Right through. Update soon!
Austin creeps me out!!! I love it hehe. I'm totally on Jamie's side. Austin is definitely a sociopath... I think. Lol I don't know, but I just have this feeling that he is... I'm gonna go read Werewolf. because I'm so seriously excited to read that update!!!!!
*NOTE* My sincerest apologies for not getting on this story sooner! I fail as your number 1 fan stalker. So sorry, so sorry. But anyway! I'm here and in tune now so I can leave a billion comments, like usual!! Uno- I looove Victoria's spunk. She's got a bit of anger streak, so she fits in a little bit with the Criminal Youths. I like her! Dos- I also love Jamie/Jay (LOL! I feel weird writing the name 'Jay', blonde and crazy come to mind when I write that name). I'm dyin' to know what he did to end up in the institute... my guess is he's protecting someone or something... OH and I really like Austin's character! He's creepy and bipolar. I love it. Lol, I was literally reading his dialogue out loud cuz it sounded so good in my head! Update soon Hailz!!! (better nick name? Better than Hailey Bailey right? hehe =D)
Love the update!!! ^_^ Please hurry and write the next chapter! I'm as addicted to your story as Jamie is addicted to his cigarettes!!! XD Update update update!
Why are there so few comments for this? *subscribes* Okay get ready for the longest comment you've ever seen (Maybe not, but I'll probably come close lol) Chap 1: "Kyle, big, blond and stupid." This made me lol for a while. So far so good. Chap2: Okay, I was so oblivious to the point that Jamie was a boy until chapter two lol..My bad. I found this entertaining. I like how you created the whole "locked up, and trapped forever" atmosphere thorough your writing. Thats an A+ in my book! lol Chap 3: "Scrap that?" Is'nt it "Scratch that?" I dont know, either way sounds nice. I love Jamies character. Hes so carefree. "I-I dont belong...here." That made me lol.
Chap 4: Jamies bro must be a gangster! lol. Her family sounds....far from balanced. Winged stories are the best. Chap 5: Rapist vs Scissors. Scissors win...lol wouldnt that be ruled as self defense in the court of law? I dont know.. Chap 6: I'm no bundle of joy in the morning either. I seriously think "good morning" is an oximoron unless its like 11:55 lol And the spiders part made me shiver.lol Chap 7: Danny sounds like he'd be friends with the mayor. Chap 8: Austin makes me wonder...Cant wait for more!!! Keep up the good work! ☆☆☆☆☆