Pandora: A Fantasy To Be Told - Comments

haha mine too. xD

By the way,
thirteen is my favorite number.

Yes.
It's on the sumary page. Didn't I tell you? ^-^ Yes, I did.

I am going to comment because I'm superstitious when it comes to 13. And seeing that Phantomhive Luna13th was commenter number thirteen, I am going to take commenter number fourteen. :D

We're doing a really good job with this story. :) Are we entered in a contest?

We're doing a good job, my friends. <3
I'm proud of this story.

Wow! Just wow! Those had me hooked! I can't wait to see what happened to Silver!!!! That has me really curious and making me think something romantic/mysterious may happen!!

I really wanna see what happens to poor Carter!!!

And the one with the ghosts in the house and DunDun I LOVED that one!! I wanna see what happens and what DunDun does! He seems SO adorable because you expect him to be mean and all but he's SO nice!!

You both did great! I'll get started on mine...once I think of something. See, I was writing it but then this computer went jack on me(a figure of speech) and wouldn't let me save it so it got deleted.

On your third chapter, I already sent you my thoughts and revising, so...♪All Up To You~♫ X3

lol. i think DunDun might be a little bit craaaazyyyyyy. i like it. xD

I loved your chapter! Can't waiiiiit to see Grace's chapter 2~!

lol. beast xP

Ohhh, cool! Then, you're beast! X3

Haha. Actually I meant 'beast'. I made no mistake. Where I live we say, "I'm beast!" and that literally means, "I'm awesome!"

Um, question, and I think I didn't see it because I was really sleepy when we revised it...but...

I'm wondering about this:

"I'll prove them wrong tonight. I'll show them who's beast."

Did you mean best? Or were just missing a letter in front of it?

Loved it!

Okay, okay, I'm here to comment like you asked me to. You guys did good. I loved both of them, I can't wait for more, and before you ask, yes, duh I'm subscribing!

woot! you to!

You did really good, Grace! I'm glad we finally posted it.