Grammar and spelling – 4.5/5 Legibility of layout – 5/5 Originality/Creativity – 10/10 How well the theme was incorporated – 10/10 How well the rules were followed – 5/5 Summary – 5/5 Story plot – 10/10 Total: 49.9
Dude, this is so interesting. Shame I still don't know what the secret is... or maybe I just wasn't reading properly? Also, I'm being picky, but sometimes you wrote "lied" when I'm pretty sure it should be "lay" in sentences. But I do love your writing style. :)
Legibility of layout – 5/5
Originality/Creativity – 10/10
How well the theme was incorporated – 10/10
How well the rules were followed – 5/5
Summary – 5/5
Story plot – 10/10
Total: 49.9
Dude, this is so interesting. Shame I still don't know what the secret is... or maybe I just wasn't reading properly? Also, I'm being picky, but sometimes you wrote "lied" when I'm pretty sure it should be "lay" in sentences. But I do love your writing style. :)