Automatonophobia - Comments

This was wonderful to read. I really enjoyed the way you wrote it.
I, for one, have this phobia. I HATE clowns/dolls/anything with a face that isn't human.
Great job. :]

I REALLY like this :) Its wonderfully written and the mixture of italics/normal text works very well. I think the way you've structured it and the language you use ('princess') makes it really creepy (it gave me chills) - and I love that!! Especially the last line It's a game, Princess, and I won.' - fantastic! It's completely different to anything I've read before and the whole concept is extremely clever. It's a shame it isn't entered for a contest because it would have undoubtedly done very well! Thanks for writing :)