I'm kinda sad that you didn't continue this :\ I loved where it was going and I just love the detail in it. Please pick this story back up! I'm dying to know what exactly you had going for it :\
I hope you continue on with the story, its really good. Don't be discouraged cause people unsubscribe or don't comment thats just life, people are mean and it sucks but its the hard truth. I do really like the story so I hope you continue it soon
You can't discontinue just because you lose subscribers and people aren't commenting! If that's what you're going to to then maybe you shouldn't post stories at all. I really like this story and I'm really looking forward to seeing what you have in store for it... Don't just quit on something that's got great potential! I'm subscribing even though you said you're ending it - maybe you'll be inspired and post again!
I hope you start this story up again. So is this gonna go into all the movies? I really hope it does. And i like where Dom and Naomi's relationship is going. Can't wait to read more. Update soon :)
I liked your character, but it took me a few minutes' worth of reading through the first chapter to realise that was actually Dom, lol. Your writing style is quite impeccable, I like the way you describe the actions, except for the few word confusions (e.g.: who's/whose). Nonetheless, it doesn't impede the understanding of the dialogue and/or storyline. In conclusion, I freaking loved this and read it in less than half an hour!
If you wish to continue it, I'd love to see a return of Jack...only one that has realised his mistakes and turned into good. +Moar Dom smexy-time!