You and Me Till the End of Time - Comments

whoa i just started reading this and im already concerned o.o but i really like your story :)

I really like it so far! can't wait to read more:)

Noooooo! Geeee! What made him do that???

Updateeee!

:o

I loooove this! Update soon?

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Haha! love it ^w^

I was unsure to read this because of the description, (bad grammar urks me) but I'm so I glad I have ! ^w^
Can't wait for the next update ^^

I wanna know what happens!o: updateeee?

I like this story so far by the way.c:

this is really good (= you should updateee

This is really good, again, the grammar isn't perfect (but who's is?)
the plot seems to be going somewhere interesting, so i'm looking forward to another update!

I realllllly liked this one! please update!

This is AWESOME!! Love it! Please update :)

I like it! *subscribes*

aww thnx

well i think its pretty sweet for your first story. i mean yeah the other two people are right it is a little choppy but everyone starts out like that. once you get into the groove of writting itll get alot better. but yeah either way its really good. the boys both have cute personalities and i really like Frank's character. looking forward for more :D

OK I WILL TRY AND IMPROVE WITH MY GRAMMER

^ that was kinda like what I wanted to say =]
I would like to read more, when the grammer etc. is better =D It's not like I'm the queen of grammar, but reading sentences with no comma's is sometimes anoying ><

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Hello!
This isn't too bad, in terms of plot, but there's a lot of room for improvement in grammar, spelling and punctuation. If you'd like, I can beta it for you, i.e. re-write it with corrected grammar and sentence structure, and then send it to you for you to read over to see if you're okay with the changes, so you can post them in in place of the existing chapters. Would that be okay? It's okay if this seems a little intrusive but I'd be glad to help. I'll happily be your beta, as long as you give me some credit for it in the author's notes of course. :]
Other than that, the actual storyline seemed interesting, and could go a long way. Well done! :DD