The Lace Connection - Comments

Likey.

This was envy-provoking.

:)

This is really good. The amount of description in the first paragraph is a little much. I kinda' skipped over it. Some one already said, but she kinda' reminds me of a less subtle Irene Adler. She's a nice change from all the week and feminine and delicate historical females.

I'm jealous of your writing. lol. Seriously though, this is really amazing.

I love your descriptions, Eva sounds magnificiently beautiful. With quite a bite in her personality x] Update soon!

I like this so far.
You have a real talent when it comes to creating a piture.
This seems like it is going to be a really original story, I cant wait for the next chapter.

Good lord, again with the descriptive words....lovely. Even that old perverted man couldn't ruin it. The girl was obviously grossed out by him, but I'm left wondering if they fooled around or if he was just having wishful thoughts. Because dear God, that'd be a horrible secret for her to carry around, not to mention he probably had a disease!xD

Hahaha, you and your 'implications.' <3
I seriously loved this. You're now on my list of favorite writers. <3

You already know my opinion of your writing.
I love this idea though, and I promise I'm going to make your banner today!!

I'm excited for you to update. XD

A little rude - tee hee x]
This was so stunning!
You have some major talent (: <3

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Stunning writing Hayley;
I just love how descriptive you are in all your stories, I especially love your use of adjectives.

How do you manage to keep readers drawn in for so long? Just superb.

I saw this on your journal and thought I'd check it out :)
That's a very nice opening line. It was very visual. The whole paragraph was.
I think it's good so far.

This may sound wierd, but... I feel you have one too many adjectives in places. Like, describing absolutely everything by putting an adjective before it gets annoying to my mind. Other than that (minor) gripe, s'cool :D.

This is amazing. Yet Again. I'm starting to feel sorry I introduced you to mibba... No I'm Joking.

:D

Haha Eva/Juliet is amazing! She's so headstrong despite her mistakes and that reminds me of Irene Adler. If you don't mind the resemblance. I love your writing style as per usual and you have a subscriber in me!

this is very good
can't wait to read more :D

I love your writing still.
So damn descriptive!
I wish I could write this well<3
I love Eva's character:D

The first paragraph is amazing!
No joke, the way you described the woman, beautiful.

That coach driver guy was pretty freaky man.

I can barely cal you a man.” you forgot the other L in call.

Nice and easy read, thanks for recommending it.
I'll subscribe to see where it goes. Good job on it!