:D!!! Thanks for submitting gurl! ^.^ There were a few grammar mistakes, but I will say the thing that popped out at me and that I just loved was those few sentences towards the end when you brought the parts of the storm in. I like when the elements are expressed (: I thought it was pretty dawgone good!
There were a few grammar mistakes, but I will say the thing that popped out at me and that I just loved was those few sentences towards the end when you brought the parts of the storm in. I like when the elements are expressed (:
I thought it was pretty dawgone good!