His Reflection Speaks To You - Comments

Woah... creepy.
I love how you wrote this!
Your writing is really quite beautiful - I love your choice of words.
I'm trying to think of something to meaningful to say about this, but I'm kind of speechless.
So I'll just say, I love this. You did a really good job portraying the phobia :]

Amazing!
One of the best things I've ever read, truthfully.

Might I say that it was very good. Creepy stuff, man.
Probably when you were reading about your phobia you know Catoptrophobics have this looking-glass idea for mirrors, and I like how you put him as the reflection or whatever, because it's like she's seeing his dappelgänger alter ego or something.

I really enjoyed it, seeing as I did a variation of the fear (Eisoptrophobia) so it's like a different window to look at it with (and I find it very creepy that we both decided to make our stories in the late 1800s with practically the same phobia.... maybe we have psychic powers. >.> ).

Anyway, Good job and good luck. :)

I honestly have no words to say or describe how beautiful - yet a bit creepy - this is. I mean, seeing your dead boyfriend in a mirror? Awesome concept!
As do I, Molly... He whispered. As do I...
Amazing ending (:
Lovely job! Good luck and thanks so much for entering! <3