I love this/Not only is the writing very good, amazing in faact, but the plot is also very enticing. The characters are believable as there are many sides to them and I enjoy this.
Im not kidding you, when I say this is friction amazing I'm truly impressed with your writing techniques and your ability to make such a thick plot : O Also the way the characters personalities and emotions are portrayed really deeply. Just amazing, instead of doing revision I spent my whole day reading this, that's how hooked I am... Update soon please~
Aw, Hunter seems so sad. He gets these times when he wants to be in charge, but then he just ca't take it and realizes how much he's come to rely on Davey. And then Davey melts <3 But what about Jade?? Is he going to fall in love with Adam? Write more!!!! (please) <3
:cheese: I love you. I fucking love you. Fucking love the chapter. To death. Pun unintended. I really love the violent and drug-fueled past Davey has, it's the most interesting and unexpected thing on earth. And I really love how mindless and pain-needing Hunter is. Intense is right. Chapter update. Now. o.o
Chapter 21 was really intense. I think you did a great job describing Hunter during his fit of rage. You're a great writer and I can't wait for chapter 22 =3
I don't think i've ever commented on this story but i just wanted to say this is great, this chapter was amazing the relationship between hunter and dave is sooooo good, keep it up and Update Soon!! :D