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    You have a lot of run on sentences, try using more periods.

    And use this, it's clickable

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    June 2nd, 2010 at 12:51am
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    It's good, but when a character is talking can you please use these " and use this ' for there thoughts. An maybe you can change the backround a little bit so that it's more readable.

    Other then the problems I'm already hooked on your story. please update soon.
    May 31st, 2010 at 04:57pm
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