Deviant - Comments

I ♥ it.
It's original and fresh.
Can't wait for an update.
Mibba's been having a dry spell lately of original stories.

Great story! I love how innocent Carrie is, heh.

I find this story very interesting. Hope you update soon!

MORE MORE MORE>.<

I like it; it's fresh and even funny (and I wasn't expecting a story called "Deviant" about sexual fetishes to have funny moments). I hope you keep updating. :)
It also reminds me a bit of Justine by the Marquis de Sade...just a bit.

Update :)

Can't wait until you update :) Great story so far

haahaa love it. its very original, the only think i could say os make sure you dont go down the happily ever after, despite not what the story is about route...ive seen loads of stories (some horrors~) end up in happilty ever after n it ruins it.

aha funny xD
what annabelle frost had said about her squeezing a whole bunch of shit into a single piece of paper made me laugh. good job so far.
jason is a douche bag.

Oh poor girl. She resorting to screwing stranger's property. Wow thats so sad, but hell it makes for good reading. Update soon.

This is a really good story. I'm subscribing.

Subscribed(:

It's really good so far. It's not that hard to get into, it's very interesting and well-written with as far as I saw, no spelling/grammar/punctuation errors. And for only three chapters written, it's very fascinating so far.

Ooh, I really like this. Very well written with satisfying chapter lengths :)
Nice job, more more more please
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i like, it original and well written.
haha i like your stutus "sexually active"!

I like this. It's....different. can't wait to meet Oliver (:

Still doing an amazing job :)

Pretty good.
Please update(:

Yay, it's original!
I'd like to see some updates on this, if you don't mind.
This sounds way better than a lot of the boring stories on here.