Sixty Nine - Comments

Love it. You write really great stories! :)

oh my god.
i seriously wish this would be continued!
this is to cute, and so so original, as i
kept reading along my mouth would go
into an 'o' because you know exactly
how to capture the good moments.
god i wish this was a story
great job on this, despite the name
Ashley is so intriguing!
great great great job on this.
xoxo

"...how much better random..."*

"...how much better random..."*

That was way too good. Like, "Stephanie Meyer most definitely needs to suck it now because that's how good random writers' stories are than hers" x2 good. I got the same feeling I get when I read Sarah Dessen's stuff from this. Awesome job.
The only thing that got me was about 2 or 3 tiny grammar mistakes. Easily passed over, though. No biggie. :D

Oh god, I've called the wrong person before, but this has never happened XD

I think that it's great Parker found someone to speak to. Ashley's like, a charming asshole, and he's the kind of person Parker would need to talk to. The whole story flowed so nicely, and there wasn't a single point where I grew bored with it like I do a lot of other stories. I didn't spot any grammatical errors, which makes me a bit smiley, and the plot was fairly original and not cliche'd, like it easily could have been.

Overal, it's a very cute, adorable little oneshot and I quite enjoyed it.

WHY CAN'T WE BE FRIENDS?
WHY CAN'T WE BE FRIENDS?!

Dude, I love it.
I love you.
And it.
And the epic awesome adorable ness.

I think you should continue :3
It was amazing, unlike anything I have ever read on here in forever. I enjoyed it a lot.
Make it a novel!

This is soo good. That isn't the end is it? Is it?

I love your layout too by-the-way.

This is so beautifully written.

Please do turn it into a novel, I'll buy the first copy, no doubt!

Yes! Novel!

I love it! Its so cute and adorable!
You HAVE to let me know if you make this into a novel! :)

I love it! Its so creative! :)
<333

This story, honestly, is... amazing. I love it, I really do, and I hope you do make it chaptered.

And I'm subscribing in case you do. Just saying. :D

I've read this before, but I'll comment again. :). You did a great job of hooking the readers and giving. Insight to the problems. I love the continuation of the mystery phone guy. The least suspecting guy knows more about her than her best friend, and she finally appears to be letting loose. You should definately continue this!

I absolutely ADORE this. It was amazingly cute, and really, really well written. I love the setting, and it is probably the best thing I have read in ages. No kidding. It was wonderful. I'm actually a bit upset that it's only a oneshot, because I would love to read more, but it works wonderful as a one shot as well. This was awesome.

God, this was adorable. I loved it. ::D

Part of me thinks it's perfect as a one shot, and part of me thinks that it would make a fantastic chaptered story.

Ok, I'll admit that the subject matter isn't really my thing. However, it was so well written that I didn't care much. In fact, I found the majority a little creepy with the whole talking to the stranger repeatedly. I was sort of expecting it to take a more sinister turn. So kudos for throwing me off and for the solid craftsmanship.

This is an awesome idea.
I love it.
I love the thought of mistaken love or whatever.

It actually gives me an idea....

op!

Anywho, I love this.

Squeak! This is good!!!^.^

Gorgeous. It cheered me up :)

this was a really sweet and cute story.
I loved it.
This willl make an excellent story when you expand upon it more.

You put a great amount of detail into this and it shows. In my book this is a number ten.
BRAVO