Aw, this was so cool <3 So much emotion in just a few paragraphs. Yet you still left a sense of curiosity at what she was thinking about. You made the reader think. I loved that about this (:
This was short, but still amazing. You managed to provoke so much thought in a few paragraphs; the descriptions and questions added a sense of curiosity to it.
So much emotion in just a few paragraphs.
Yet you still left a sense of curiosity at what she was thinking about.
You made the reader think.
I loved that about this (: