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PLEASE UPDATE?!

utter ruleage!

Love! Can't wait to see what happens next. :D

Uh-oh, trouble in paradise! I blame the angst... Love it though, Lynnie!

Can't wait for the next one!

Still awesome, though! Take that Layla!

Comment whore!

Lol. Love it! Can't wait for the next.

sixteen:
John is such a weirdy, lol. He's not affected by the awkwardness at all, ha.
Awhhhh! That must be Matt speak for 'I love you' [: cute, cute, cute.
loved the outfit too. Very cute shoes!

fifteen:
How else do you do something with the boyfriend without big brother going hulk? You don't tell big brother until the very last second :D ha.
It's cute how they're going on a mini-vacation.
'I am definitely watching you when we go swimming.' lol!

fourteen:
Ewh, yuck. Matt's soo overbearing D: It's like, 'dude, remove the stick from your ass and chill!'
Anyway, I keep getting behind in reading this |: How annoying.
Maryse is a sneaky, sneaky Canadian [x how devious.
Awh. Nightmare on Elm Street and slushies. The perfect way to forgive someone, haha.

There was a slight typo!

Love it though, very cute!

Here's another comment from me! Can't wait for the next bit!

loved it! more soon?

Woohoo! Vacation time!

Heat it up! Heat it up! Lol.

Can't wait for the next wonderful bit.

Sorry about not being able to watch Cody... he's been so cute lately!

Here's a comment!

Cute chapter!

I would accept that bribe too! From any Superstar...

chapter thirteen:
Ohhhh, Matt's pissed :O that's not going to be good for John.
it's cute how close Mimi and Devvy are.
RED CAST! favourite colour right there [:
AWH! Matt and Dev all curled up, David taking Mimi to breakfast. cute chapter.
Lynn, we're stopped for the next few weeks, you better update!

chapter twelve:
Hmm? I wonder what's wrong with Kane? weird.
Ohh mann, Devvy's arm! Everybody's gonna be pissed at John! D: poor John. he's my favourite! ha.

chapter eleven:
Oh My Gosh! that aquarium date was brilliant! I wish a guy would take me to an aquarium D:
ha. loved her outfit too, just sayinn'[:

chapter ten:
awh. that was a really cute chapter. gotta love the part about the sister being a nun, ha.
Oh John, stop being so over protective! Dev can do whatever she wants, right? lol [:

I mean, I know I'm not Cena's biggest fan but LAY OFF MATT! Geez! No his damn fault.

Love the cuteness between Mimi and David.

That damn David! *shakes fist playfully*

Oh, those goddamn bad feelings. They suck. Poor Dev, I hope she'll be relatively okay.

Can't wait for the next chapter!