When They Cry - Comments

You lost touch with the characters Dx
And things moved too fast between them
It was way too simplified and convenient
But
If I didn't like the story, I wouldn't be reading it(:
You did a good job ^^

....oh. So I absolutely loved this story even if I'm a little slow fidning it... but Joey ='[ Aww. My soul feels like it just got stabbed by some shards of glass and then stomped by a ginat='[

I loved this one too!!!! BUT WHY MUST HE DIE!?!?!?

I'm going to go cry in a corner....

I'll continue on to the sequal when I'm done.....

OMFG!
I CAN'T BELIEVE HE FUCKING DIED!
DX

you fucking bitch
you made me cry
and this is the second time I've read it too!
I still can't believe you did that T.T

:O I didn't realize Joey really died :(

Wow cute story

OMG you should make ocean and ran get together :D

ohmygod, TEARS.

So...... Joey's....... Dead?
I had to read the sequel update and he's...............Dead!
Holyfreakin'mylittlepony!
I really want you to make a sequel, you're amazing.

p.s I'll miss you Joey!!!!!! )':

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/reads sequal.

i dont want anythign bad to happen D:

awww!!
they are so cute together!!!!
cant wait for the next update!!
keep up the great work hun!!!
XD

awwww!!
i love it so far!!
update soon!!
keep up the good work!!!
XD

OMG!!!! this story is soo cute!!!!!XD update soon please!!

^ I was gunna say that so I'll say it anyway
Is Ransom gunna raep him? That's be terrible.
Rape would be better then Ransom commiting suicide.
But no drama would be nice. But that makes a story xD
(I'll rape Ocean ;D)

is ransom going to rape him?
i think so.
what else bad could happen in the room?
other than suicide, or ransom's suicide...
yeah, i think it's rape.
...why am i excited?
but then again, i'm not sure if it'll be rape,
but a girl can hope.

I love this story!
I feel so sorry for Ransom though :(

OMG silent reader but gotta say I LOVE FER SUR
i listen to it at least once a day :P
UPDATE SOON
please happy ending between Ocean and Joey
i'll give you a cookie :D

Poor Ransom.
Poor Joy for bing with an asshole.
Ocean♥Joey
YAAY!
(Ransom should like, tell Ocean he love him in a non brotherly way.)