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  • like jack and sally.

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    Awwww, that was cute!!!
    And a sequel would be amazing.
    Also, I loved how you made the locker seen in the banner into the story. :)
    June 15th, 2010 at 04:04am
  • DeleteAccount01

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    One more left??? damn, i want this story to go forever ^_^ really enjoyed this ^_^ xx
    June 14th, 2010 at 07:15pm
  • shelby! at the disco

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    I love this story, so very much.
    It's very well - written, and has a good story line to it.
    (:
    June 14th, 2010 at 07:03pm
  • Love. Hope. Dreams.

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    stupid family.
    stupid dad.
    stupid stripper.
    stupid slut
    thank GOD she got emancipated from her stupid family.
    =) i cant wait for the next chapter and sequel
    <3
    June 14th, 2010 at 05:39pm
  • ilovemasonmusso

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    this store has been amazing:D
    June 14th, 2010 at 03:42pm
  • Morgansaurus.'

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    Aw good on Ella. I really like this chapter. It was sweet and lots more.
    June 14th, 2010 at 02:32pm
  • pezzie

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    OMG! Only one more chapter left! Ah, I bet it will be great.
    June 14th, 2010 at 07:05am
  • Effing Perfect.

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    OMG i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update!
    June 14th, 2010 at 04:39am
  • why.LOVE.me?

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    love it

    i am VERY sad that its going to end :'(
    June 14th, 2010 at 02:25am
  • like jack and sally.

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    I am so proud of Ella. :)
    But I'm also kinda sad that this story is ending.
    June 14th, 2010 at 12:22am
  • i don't wanna dance.

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    Shocking, but still absolutely amazing. :D
    I like the way this ended. You would have never thought at the beginning she would move out and stuff.
    So yeah, this deserves way more than ten stars. <3
    June 14th, 2010 at 12:15am
  • Eleanor Rose Rigby

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    Sooo, this sort of Cinderella plot line is usually done. It can be quite cheesy. But this is amazing.I'm really hooked on this story and keep coming back to read it. I love it!
    June 13th, 2010 at 08:40pm
  • DeleteAccount01

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    Go ELLA!!! god they all deserve a good puch in the face x10!!! she should live with Justin!!! ^_^ keep it up, im atached now!!! xx
    June 13th, 2010 at 07:27pm
  • why.LOVE.me?

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    I love it

    Go Ella for sticking up for herself
    June 13th, 2010 at 01:29pm
  • water lily

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    I KNEW it! I KNEW Rebecca was going to be mean again. xD
    That girl cannot be trusted.

    Anyway, this was a very shocking chapter. I love the suspense! ;P
    I hate how Ella's dad is so oblivious, though. Ugh.
    Great chapter; update soon? (:
    June 13th, 2010 at 07:22am
  • Morgansaurus.'

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    Aw nooo! Good on Ella, but that was kinda sad. And Hannah and Becca deserved what they got, her dad has now infuriated me. :/
    Update soon!
    June 13th, 2010 at 07:20am
  • MentalMasturbation

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    hey. i dont find justin attractive in the obvious way, since im a tad old for him, but i like his music and i think hes rather sweet. but your story caught my eye and i just wanted to say that its a sweet and rad story. you took an obvious plot and made it your own, which i reprect fellow writers for. and by the way, im fucking thrilled to find some one who actually fucking knows about balto! you are officially rad, i fucking loue the story and the film they made about it. When i was little and saw it i loved it so much that my dad made me a wooden sledge/slay, thats how obssessive i get lmao so you should update! X
    June 13th, 2010 at 07:09am
  • Effing Perfect.

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    Have her go to Justin's house and stay and then her parents find out and be like WTH are you doing staying at some random guys house?!? and she'll be like He's not just a random guy he is my BOYFRIEND! and they are like WTF are you doing at his house and etc. lol i think it would be really good(:
    June 13th, 2010 at 06:12am
  • i don't wanna dance.

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    That was shocking. :O
    I'm glad she left. Now she should go to Justin's. :)
    Update.
    Soon.
    Please! <3
    June 13th, 2010 at 04:38am
  • like jack and sally.

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    Somehow I knew Rebecca wouldn't be on my good list for long. As I say, once a backstabbing bitch, always a backstabbing bitch.
    And Hannah needs to go to hell. Ella's mom shot herself, while Ella watced, that's not something to make fun of a person about. At all.
    Finally, thank God that Ella is moving out.
    Update soon, m'kay?
    June 13th, 2010 at 04:00am