whoooh read it al in one day :D I've been looking for a story like this for like forever XD I'm so happy now :D Keep the chapters coming, I'll be waiting for them :D
I just read some of the comments that you put above and i noticed the spellings in this one xD Oh well though Another great chapter Oh and i'll have to have a look. Will i need to make an account to read it on quizlla? Might sound like a stupid question but oh well hehe I'm tired, and my glasses are downstairs so i can't see as well...I think i'll get them now
a7x.Sick.Puppie.x: Read on ,but I can tell you Debbie wont cheat on him :P No more hints xD Oh there are reasons why Ash was willing to do the plan ;) And I'm glad you got the notification this time, or else I would have had to go on you're profile and inform you :P
In some ways I'm glad that the plan worked but in others i'm really annoyed I mean, I feel sorry for Ryder now and i have a feeling that whatsername (lol) will end up cheating on him as well from what's been said about her. Plus, when Ash went after Amy i felt like he really did care for her and love her, which made me think about why he'd still go through with that plan... hmmm I'm not sure if she'll be able to get Ash to like her to be honest. He seems too interested in Amy, plus he knows what lengths she's willing to go to to get her revenge xD Ha, i just remembered who whatsername is hehe I don't like Debbie at all She's so fake and dumb and grrr lol she annoys me I can't imagine one of my friends ever turning into something like that. Not her THAT hehe Ermmm, do i have anything else i need to say? YES Haha I actually got the notification thingy this time! Hehe Loving this, as always, and i can't wait to read some more of it ,...Oh and i have a feeling that Ryder and Alvii will somehow get a bit closer again :D
I love the plot/story line. I don't really know why, but I want Amy and Ash together. Like I said, story line is good, but spelling is not so much. I hope you won't take this as a negative comment but positive.
Right, I started reading the last few updates ages ago but then i got distracted and forgot, but i remembered now and i'm up to date again xD
As usual i loved all of that but Ash again Grr he's really getting on my nerves. I hate him but kind of like him too at the same time, but did he seriously have to no show for her birthday, i mean come one...He can be a bit of an idiot at times -sigh-
Ryder keeps growing on me xD And my thoughts about her struggling to break up with him are comming closer and closer to the front of my mind. What if she actually falls for him? Hehehe.
I feel sorry for Ronnie, the last few lines really summed up how embarrassed she makes him dont they. But i really like him anyways. Oh and talk of that/i] scene, i'm actually relly glad that they didn't do anything because, well, it showed that he had some self control. I remember at the start the way that she described him with girls, and i suppose you could see some of that Ryder but it wasnt as bad as i used to think. Plus he gave up that club for her awww
Loved the bit about the dad getting them the things they want and the mum getting them random expensive things hehe
And, oh, just remembered about the speech they're going to need to do. Omg i keep remembering things that happened now. RYDER WITH THE PRINCIPLE! OMG! YOU DONT DO THAT! ...it was funny though mwhahahhaa
Anyways, as usual i can't wait for more!
My comments are really long xD I just noticed how very long they are. They usually aren't like this so this must show that your story gives me a lot to talk about
I'm really angry now -sorry- I just wrote a really long comment but then Mibba Died!!!!!!!!!!!! GRRRRRRR! So it didnt post it :@ I'll try again...
Normal comment: I absolutley hate Trent.! She's sooo evil!!!! But i was really happy when Alvii's hand 'slipped' and 'accidently' slapped her. Wooooooooooooo
(What else did i say in my last comment before it didnt post) Oh I really like Ronnie, hehe. And im really glad that Alvii's being so nice to him.
Hmm. Oh yeah! They broke up!!!!!! YEY! But they broke up to hurt Ryder :( I actually don't want them to do this to him now... waaaaaa
And im loving the slightly over protective brothers xD They rule! :) Haha
Can't wait for more, even if i dont get the silly notification thing...
(sorry for the anger at the start... mibba was annoying me)
Sorry i havent commented in ages, I wasnt getting the e-mail updates for some reason and i looked on this today and was like wow there's more and instantly started reading xD
I love love loved the updates :) He's with Amy again... I have a feeling someone might be a little bit jealous.
and yay! Her plan is working and she'll hurt Ryder... the only prblem is he's starting to seem nicer to me... maybe she wont floow through with her little plan
Oh and i wonder who the band are she wans to see... hmmmm
I can't believe you left it with them being alone. Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa I want to read more!!!! xD
I really love this story, I've only just found out about it and I'm hooked :) Awww, I like Ryder he's nice and annoying at the same time, but you can tell he cares about Alvii.
I lol'ed when Carter just walked out after saying he'd look after her, typical.
I can't wait for the next update. (Stupid Ash sleeping with stupid Amy) - I don't care if they had a fake relationship, he shouldn't have done it :)
And thank you :)