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  • Livelaughlove1221

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    The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!
    June 22nd, 2012 at 04:24pm
  • manderzz

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    Nice prologue! it was a really interesting start, and very intriguing. You definitely caught my attention and it made me want to read on :)
    June 18th, 2011 at 11:23pm
  • Jack.Barakatt

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    I dont want to die,, so youu can keep youur song lyrics... o.O
    June 20th, 2010 at 12:01pm
  • Jack.Barakatt

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    I dont want to die,, so youu can keep youur song lyrics... o.O
    June 20th, 2010 at 12:01pm
  • Faith Tenderheart;

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    Love the update :]]
    June 20th, 2010 at 01:35am
  • SmexyPeanutButter

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    Nice song lyrics. LOVE IT!!!!! :)

    UPDATE PLEASE!!!
    June 18th, 2010 at 02:08am
  • SmexyPeanutButter

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    Nice. I can't believe it.

    Update please!!! :D
    June 6th, 2010 at 09:59pm
  • StarKidLover4

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    Liking it so far!! All the stories in the contest are SO good it's going to be REALLY hard to chose a winner!
    June 6th, 2010 at 05:13am
  • Jack.Barakatt

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    Thats awesome,, I actually really wanted a 'chapter 3' button to appear..x
    June 2nd, 2010 at 11:13am
  • Faith Tenderheart;

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    Loved the update :}
    June 1st, 2010 at 11:55pm
  • Faith Tenderheart;

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    Ohhh. It sounds interesting :]
    June 1st, 2010 at 06:49pm
  • Jack.Barakatt

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    you can almost tell this is headed for disaster!
    Awesome start..x
    June 1st, 2010 at 04:37pm
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