I really don't know how to begin describing how much I loved the way you ended this story. First of all, I was amazed how realistic everything seemed--how Jack was pissed that Alex had refused to go his his birthday, Jack's reaction to his new hair, the way Jack was jealous of James and Alex's relationship, how everything was still complicated, but seemed to work out in the end. This chapter summed up everything perfectly.
This entire story was beautifully written, and I can't wait to read more from you.
awww that was an incredible ending! iv loved this story soo much, the way you write is really amazing! yes, i'd definitely read a sequel if you did one :)
raaaa. this was amazingly written; you have great talent. i'd read a sequel ;D i have a feeling deep in my stomach for poor alex though. awwww. ohmygod write more please ? i've just realised how much i'm going to miss getting emails about this being updated!!!!! xoxo
I really happy with how you chose to end this story. It wasn't cliche, not was it dramatically depressing. I'm not sure how you did it, but you managed to leave everything with a realistic, yet hopeful note.
I really happy with how you chose to end this story. It wasn't cliche, not was it dramatically depressing. I'm not sure how you did it, but you managed to leave everything with a realistic, yet hopeful note.
I just read this whole story! I cried twice. Called Jack a douche more that 30 times. Wanted to punch Alex in the face twice. Felt bed for Zach almost the whole time. Loved how Rian was well...... Rian. Then I realized that I didn't want to hurt Alex as much as Jack :p I really enjoyed this story. You're amazing (: