Synthetic Maze - Comments

I'm really not a fan of Oli stories, but I really love the way you write. More soon?

ah, ive finally found this story again c: i really loved the last chapter, its was so cute. this story is really good, its not rush rush rush, its very real and believable, you're doing an amazing job, keep it up! i can't wait to see what else happens, i'm hooked!

Loved this part as well, very excited to see where it heads! I hope Abbey doesn't shut herself off if Oli makes a move on her.

Clever way to bring Oli in, I must say. Abbey needs another boy right about now!

I loved this so much. Definitely worth the wait.

I really like this, update soon? :D

I think her problems are going to follow her, they tend to do that :P

Aaah, love it and it was well worth the wait. :)

i adore this whole story.
i'm not even an oli fan, so i clicked on the story because the title looked interesting. the layout's gorgeous and i really like Abbey's character. and Andy! :D
this is all really cute, no kidding. (:

I feel bad for Abbey ):

So many mothers are the same way as Abbey's, they don't understand when to just stop. I can sympathize with her there.

Poor Abbey.
At least her brother was there for her :)

This is going to be really good. I'm excited to read more.

I definitely love this so far, I am very excited to see where it goes!

this sounds really good! i like the proteive brothers, ive got one like that! & i like how you related something to do with english celebrities! everyone always does it with american. it just makes me miss england even more. anyways, this does look like its going to be a really good story, your writing is really good and i can't wait to read more, so do indeed update soon, i shall be subcribing for sure, keep the good work going, more people will comment soon (: