Mutiny Below - Comments

Oh my god. I can't believe his is about to be over... I remember when it started... Man, ima miss this):. Oh well. There'll be a sequel, right? D;

My heart is breaking! Between Nat and Halvo's goodbye and then John not reaching her in time I want to cry.

Ah man! That was soooo sad! Poor Johnoh!! :'( He bettaa get herr! Seriously!! :'D UPDATE ASAP PLEAAAASE(: <3

holy fuck! this is just waaaay too good.
I don't even know what to say. Finally John & Nat! :)
(Also, I still don't particularly like Jayce)

NO SHE WASN'T MEANT TO LEAVE!?
Godammit, these two, Jayce and Nick have their happily ever after basically almost in hand, but the other two.
Ugh.
Can't wait for more!

No! John and Nat! Gah, John should get on a plane and look for her, please. Or maybe Nat didn't get on that plane because reasons. I just want them together okay?
It's just... I ship them harder than I ship Jayce/Nick. Come on, he loves her, just let them be happy together and have beautiful babies or something,

No! John and Nat! Gah, John should get on a plane and look for her, please. Or maybe Nat didn't get on that plane because reasons. I just want them together okay?
It's just... I ship them harder than I ship Jayce/Nick. Come on, he loves her, just let them be happy together and have beautiful babies or something,

I do feel bad for Jayce but at the same time I think this is the best thing that could happen from this messed up situation. The way Nick was comforting her was so sweet. I really, really hope everything works out...aka John ends up with Nat and Nick ends up with Jacye and they're all happy.

Aww they love each other, Nick and Jayce should get married, or not, I don't know, I kind of want Nick for myself. Still though, the angst between Jace and John, I cannot stand it, it's way to heartbreaking.
Now to wait for John and Nat, I hope they'll end up together.

AND THERE IT IS.
THE TRUTH.
Now the real fun begins.
:3

mmm John. ♥
Oh and I mean I like the Natalie and John thing, but I kind of want her to fall in love with Eric lol.

I loved this chapter. I was so surprised that Nat was the one who let everything slip. She's so quiet and reserved that I wasn't expecting it from her but I'm glad she did because it needed to come out. I can't wait to see what happens next!

I can't wait what's gonna happen next! I love you Marissa! What Natalia did was the best! I think John will be with Nat hahaha :D

holy shit! everything came out!
i can't wait to see what's gonna happen next

When I read the chapter title, my only thought was, "Shit just got real."
This chapter... It's really something, you know? I still think the bond between Nick and Nat is one of the sweetesr ever. I can't wait for the next chapter, I wonder what happened between Jayce, Nick, and John after Nat left?
Update!

The truth is out! Oh my god! FINALLY!! :'D Ahaa, i liked the way it all came out too! Poor Nat! Drank a little too much! But at least she told John! Please update again asap! This story is addictive! <3

This has got to be one of the best stories i've read. It's just fodnfk mfoeijcnb d words cannot explain how amazing it is! Please update asap!!<3

Forget John and Jayce.
I want John and Nat, those two are just...so cute.
But I can feel the tension and drama building up.
This is getting gooood.

Even though there's only a couple days before tour starts I have a feeling there will still be plenty of drama.

I just want John and Nat to be together. At least he's finally admitting that he likes Nat. He's not doing anything about it though. I wonder how he'll react when he finds out that Nat is going home instead of on tour.