John kissed her? Oh my gosh!! I wonder if he's going to tell Jayce...or Halvo. Dang, things are so dramatic but so good. I'm down for a sequel. This story is so good.
I forgot to comment last chapter. I suck. :( But John, falling for her, and kissing, and just, yeah. His chapter, though. Oh, my. With the jealousy, and not really being into Jayce so much anymore :D I loved it. This chapter, Nick noticing John's jealous face, and Natalia noticing that...Gah. So much can happen. But poor Halvo. I feel so bad for wanting Natalia & John to be together. And I'm gonna keep my comment short. Because I'm going to probably reread this all again. Because I didn't comment last chapter, I couldn't say I wanted a sequel. Which I do. A lot. :)
SWEET BABY JESUS. THEY KISSED. I had to read that over at least three times to make sure they actually did kiss and they did and I went spastic. Do I want this to end? No. So my vote goes towards a sequel! Can't wait for more! :D
Heyy. So I've sat here, for hours and hours, reading this story. It's taken me two days to catch up with what has already been posted, but I got hooked. So much so, I put off doing lots of homework just to finish it. It's a nice plot going on. Admittedly, I've read many stories with love triangles, but this one stuck out because it's different. I'm not sure what it was I was expecting but I know this wasn't it.
I'm not going to lie, there have been a few occasions where I want to punch Jayce for breaking everyone's hearts, or wanted to Natalia for being so shy, but I guess that's just me being so involved in the story itself. However, the girls are actually well developed characters, and I love them for being easy to relate to. Even Jayce, who does have her moments.
And the guys, I don't even have the courage to try and choose teams. Because as soon as I decide I want Jayce and Nick, and Natalia and John, John becomes Mr. Perfect, and Halvo acts so lovingly, it changes. So I give up. The pair of you win.
I'm sorry this is rather a long comment, and is more of a summary one, than one for a specific chapter. I promise that when you update next, my next comment will be about that chapter, and not everything that has happened in the past 61... Judging from the length of this story, and the fact that quite a lot has to happen, it's not near the end. And I'm glad. I have a feeling I will miss having this to read when it's over. I kind of feel that already.
So, it's half 11 here, and I need to go to bed because I have coursework, a geographical handout, and an essay to produce, preferably before Monday. But I really wanted to tell you how I much I loved this story. Thank you for all of your efforts so far. 61 chapters is a rather overwhelming read.
Anyway, you've got a new subscriber. I'm a little late, but I'm here nonetheless :)
Love it in John's point of view! He's so jealous and doesn't even realize it at first. I cannot wait for more! I wanna see more of this plan working! Hahaha. Update again soon please!!!
i really like that that chapter was in John's pov. gives us more insight on the whole situation, instead of it just being Jayce and Natalia. Update soon! :)
I've finally caught up on reading this story and holy shit dudes. This story is fucking amazing. Right from the start I couldn't stop reading it. At first I hated Nick for not leaving Jayce, but then I began to hate on her when I got the feeling she was just leading them along. Then John, aklsdjflkasjdf, that boy, too cute, too cute. But then Nat entered into his life and I knew that there was some sort of chemistry going on there. This story is amazing. I can't wait to see how this plan works out, if it even does. Please, for the Halvo's sexiness, update soon. [:
the tension is beyond intense. halvo is completely adorable, he's a little too good at being a pretend boyfriend haha but i love it. and i really want john to go after nat, so bad! please continue to update.