Mutiny Below - Comments

Oooh JohnOhh, this story is so twisted.
But I love every twisted second.
But John...his true feelings are falling through.
I have a feeling though that everything is going to be revealed very soon and I can not wait for that.

Awww John, you're so cute when you feel guilty. Still, he shouldn't be because Jayce cheated on him and Nat's not really dating Halvo. Even though Halvo is not really dating Nat, he should've noticed her bad mood, seriously.
Please tell me there will be a happy chapter soon...

if only johno knew that their relationship was fake, or that he shouldn't feel so guilty because jayce cheated too...anyways can't wait for more! =} happy new year's eve!

Thanks for the update i miss this story as for sequel that be awesome please please update soon

This situation is seriously such a mess and I have no clue how they're all going to fix it. Even if Nat goes home nothing's going to be solved. Nick will still have feelings for Jayce, Jayce will still be confused, John will also still be confused, and Halvo will be sad that Nat's gone because I think he really does like Nat even though their relationship is just supposed to be pretend.

I do like this story but i think Nat should end up with Eric.

oooh!!! i REALLY really REALLY want to john and nat to be together, because things just make sense when they're together but i think the way halvo treats her is so cute and he'd be such a good boyfriend to her. =} great job! keep em' coming please!

Oh god, it's so sad but I like it at all.
John should be with Nat and Nick with Jayce. It'll be happy ending :p
Eric should find a new girl hahaha
I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Finally! I miss this story, seriously.
It's not just Nick's fault. I mean... I think John's the most innocent one out of the four of them. Nat agreed to help Nick, Nick's just... he's being Nick and Jayce, she kept giving in to Nick.

no, he's not being hard on himself. he's finally realizing the stupid mess he got himself and his sister in and I think that was so wrong. he is selfish and needs to change.

I cannot EVEN with this story right now. I kind of just read the entire thing in a day. Please please please tell me you're updating soon. I don't think I can wait very long:D

Please post the next chapter, I really can't wait <3

I also want the sequel!!!!!! It'll be great! Can't wait <3

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Hey,

I've been reading and catching up with this fic/fanfic for about 2-3 days now. It is such an interesting fic that I read. I never really leave comments whenever I read fics here, but this is an exception. I would love to read more, and hope to see a sequel. Also...I remember in a lot of the chapters where you or the other author describes Nick's eyes--I think they're a deep green/teal instead hazel. I love Rocket to the Moon (maybe a bit too obsessed) and even though Nick's behavior/temperament is probably not like that completely in real life, it's still great to read him in a story. Eric is hilarious in this, John is a sweetheart and seeing Nat's personality blooming is great. However, I think there should be more action between Nat and John, but I'm sure there will be in the upcoming chapters. And everything on my body was itching and still waiting to see Jayce finally ending it with John so she can be with Nick. She tends to continue to hurt people and cause drama for others which I wanted to slap her in the face for that (haha). There were some not-so-interesting parts in the beginning of the story that were intertwining throughout the chapters and noticed that I sometimes had to scroll down some parts that were previously said in the past chapters(s) to get to the action.

But... I give you a LOT of props and acknowledgement that you kept writing a story with a lot of chapters-- not many people would have the motivation to continue for that long. You surely deserve an award! :D It seems like you know what you're doing. I really hope you don't get upset for such a long comment, but just wanted to let you know that you deserve a response after all of the hard work. Please know that I'll be looking forward and ready to read for what you have to share for this story! If you are thinking about a sequel, I'll definitely be reading that too!

I think that there should definitely be a sequel, probably my favorite story on mibba ever :)

oh my god oh my god oh my godddddddddd yay

I would definitely read a sequel!! :D

I WANT A SEQUEL!!!!

SEQUEL!
love this story, i dont want it to end! seriously you are an awesome writer.
cant wait for the next chapter :)