This is one epic fanfiction of an epic fandom. I was so excited when I saw it was of The Lost Boys; you really don't see too much about that movie on this site, anywhere. This is really quite well-written, and a pleasure to read. And damn, this is hot. I was never particularly into David or Michael in the movie, but the way you write David is positively delicious. Some things I would like to note: I'm not sure when this story is set in, because it seems a bit....Not eighties at times. Also, especially in the beginning chapters, I wish the story would have deviated from the movie (the chapter with the Frog brothers almost seemed word-for-word from the movie). Otherwise, brilliant.
On an unrelated side-note, I love the layout. I didn't notice any grammar mistakes either, so. Good job. This is a great story, and I'm subscribing.