I Bite Back - Comments

Neat..:) Very brilliant and creative, as well as very well-written so far, too. I like it. :) Plus, I sometimes like to write about vampires, and I usually view them as going after and preying on the bad guys — especially criminals — and keeping the innocent as safe as possible. :)

Well when I read your comment I was like I am going to go look at her story! And this one looked new so I am reading this first. :p
And if you think this one is bad you are wrong!
I can't wait for the next chapter, I like how you do the descriptions because when i write i get so excited and I always skip all of that to try to get to the point...hahaha
But I really like the first chapter! :D

i Love it, are You going To write more Because I want To know What happens

What is this story going to be abt