Happy New Year - Comments

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yes i'm so eloquent i know

I honestly have no idea who Ben Whishaw ( hope I didn't butcher the last name) is, but this one shot makes me want to find out! I loved this so much and it was extremely captivating from start to finish. You have such a wonderful writing style.

Great Job. I love that I don't even have to know who this dude is to enjoy this one-shot. It's a true test of your abilities as a writer and you've passed with flying colors.

-Lady Love

That was so good! It just made me go "aww!" :3 Your writing is really amazing, and the story was so sweet. :)

I loved it. <3

I LOVE DR. SEUSS.

Sorry, had to get that out. The dude in the picture's pretty good looking, too.

Also had to get that out/notgay.

I love your writing, and this was definitely sweet. It was a comforting read. <3 Well done.

Dr.

I loved this! :D
The layout, writing, details - everything was amazing!
It flowed really well, and the details, again - were brilliant!
I just adored it.
This was so sweet!
Wonderful job! (:

I love love love the layout :D
I really like the story too, it's amazing. I love how you describe everything and all the detail.
It's really amazing :D

I like how simple the layout is. C:

It doesn't distract me one bit from reading all those incredible words you create. I'm in love with your detail, mostly. They could be doing the simplest action and it sounds so much more fabulous because of your word choice and detail.

The story you depicted was sweet. I loved it. (:

It's such a pretty story. That's something you don't come across a lot, because a lot of stories have sad endings. Your layout was lovely, I especially loved the background color. The story was filled with description, a bonus in my opinion. It really flowed, and helped it on it's way.

It was really sweet, and huggable. Incredible job. :}

I feel like you've told me to read this.
So I did. :D

The snow fell endlessly from the sky, for two long days it had continued to litter across the ground, scattering all over the city of New York, blanketing it in white.
Dammit, you got me there. I love snow scenes. Snow is just so... pretty. :D

Your descriptions, as per usual, are ah-mazing. It's so easy to picture New York in the winter time!

And I'm not quite sure who this Ben Whishaw character is (Google here I come!) but I find him adorably sweet the way that you describe him. I think this entire thing is just so gosh darn adorable, I want to put them both in my purse and run away as I do with all cute thing.

Though I'm lacking a purse big enough. And I'm pretty weak...

It's so... simple. I love simple things, you know? Just like, the snow. A flower. It's just... perfect in it's own simple way. :D

Though, I have one thing to say. His breath turned blue as it hit the air, billowing from his mouth as he shivered into the wool covering his face, it had to be less than 15 degrees outside, he decided.

I feel like after face you should have been a period. But that's just me.

Like I said, it's great. Everything's great. You're great.

Oh my lord, this was too adorable. Beautifully written, dear. <3

I'm terrible at comments, so you'll have to excuse this.
I don't know who Ben is, but I don't think it mattered much.
I didn't need to know him to understand how adorable this is. <3
Your writing is very descriptive and just overall lovely. :D

This was beyond cute.
Idk who this Ben is but now I'm intrigued in searching him up - google, here I come!
Again, it's amazing. :)

This was beyond cute.
Idk who this Ben but now I'm intrigued in searching him up - google, here I come!
Again, it's amazing. :)

Aww. <3
So cute, loved it. :)
Descriptive, and you showed instead of told. Instead of saying "I was happy" you showed how he was happy.
Perfect. :D

It was great. I adored the summary and the picture as well as the layout. It's very simple and a delight to read.

Ben Whishaw oneshot? Where have you been hiding this? I should have known about this sooner.
The simplicity of the layout is perfect. It fits the story and doesn't take anything away from the words. The colour tones go together well, in my own opinion.
The use of descriptive words with the dialogue, it made this picture-perfect.
I can imagine everything so clearly; the setting, the characters, their emotions.
I just, I fancy this so much. Please, do write more!

I loved it. It was so cute, and so descriptive. I loved the way you arranged your sentences and the words you used. It had a kind of slow pace, but not the kind where it dragged out- it was a comfortable speed. It actually kind of reminded me of winter.

I love it!
And it was so descriptive, and very cute!! ^^

Three more blocks and you'll get to see her. That line right there made me smile. It's just so simple and sweet. I can really imagine the weather in the story too, and he's going through all of that just to see her. It's so sweet. Anyways! Onto the rest.

“You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.” You would quote Dr. Seuss. You would. I love you for it too. Such a simple little thing to say, yet so cute and fitting to the story.

"Who knows, who cares" You forgot punctuation at the end of a couple sentences like that. Minor accidents. That there needs a period, seeing as you said it was a statement rather than a question.

"Happy new year, Ben" Needs a comma at the end.
"Happy new year" Needs a period.
"That wasn't very nice" Period.
"Mhhm" Period. Small things like that can really throw an amazing story off. (:

But anyways, I loved this. It was so descriptive and I could just piss myself with happiness. Finally someone who knows how to fucking write. <3

I love you more than words can comprehend for this story.
It's just so perfect.
I literally wish that I didn't need to pinch myself in order to get out of such a perfect world, it was so realistic and I could almost feel the snow being smashed into my face,
It was just so, I can't explain it.
You wrote Ben perfectly and I can imagine that is difficult to do as his character and manner of things is so different.

“You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.” - this was a beautiful line. I loved it and it was so Ben. :3
I just loved the childishness of it, that despite the fact both Ben and I are adults in this one-shot we can let ourselves go and act like a child at Christmas.

Honestly, you're amazing.