And I Stumble - Comments

JimmysLover (100)

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More More More...You haven't updated in a while and I'm tired of waiting!!!

June 18th, 2008 at 03:07am

Ol' Blue Eyes. (100)

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Update this please.

October 29th, 2007 at 09:36am

Slap Happy Bullet (100)

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will you ever update this?
i love so much this perspective you have. it's so wonderful.
i wish that i came up with it.
and i promise if you update... i'll read it. there's still a lot more to be uncovered.

October 3rd, 2007 at 08:29am

Sensual Violation (100)

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:o

Wow.

There were so many bits that I wanted to copy and paste here and tell you how great they were but there really was too many to do that.

I did pick a favourite though;

Granted, when I've pushed you out of my mind, you stay out. Because we all know the truth.

Adrienne's a great distraction.

What an asshole.

September 1st, 2007 at 09:42pm

dreamersrequiem (150)

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that was,,,awesome. that's all i can really say.
except for i cried at billie's parts, but that's partly because good riddence started playing as i read it.
would LOVE to see more

June 13th, 2007 at 08:46pm

Loser!!! (100)

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It confused me for awhile....but after i read the 3rd chapter i got it

i know im slow.....DONT JUDGE ME!!!!!!

anyway...good job

keep writing more....please

June 12th, 2007 at 06:53pm

Slap Happy Bullet (100)

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yeah you should definately update this soon.
i like this story a hell of a lot.

April 30th, 2007 at 10:33pm

libbey crocodile. (100)

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I'mSpecial_HowAboutU:
I think I counted 12 or 14 times, now I can't remember. So not as much as i thought but still a lot. It gets worse in the middle. Anyways it was good, short but good. Make the next one longer!

It's twelve. Ahahaha. It's in that one paragraph in almost every line. :tehe: Oops.

I'll work on the size.

April 19th, 2007 at 10:56pm

Ordinary.X.Day (100)

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I think I counted 12 or 14 times, now I can't remember. So not as much as i thought but still a lot. It gets worse in the middle. Anyways it was good, short but good. Make the next one longer!

April 19th, 2007 at 10:49pm

Slap Happy Bullet (100)

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oh wow this is really amazing.
it's so interesting in the way you write it.. like no dialogue and i think that's one of the greatest ways to tell a story. i love this so much.. i hope you keep going with it.

April 18th, 2007 at 03:46am