Yay:) I like that God is a woman lol, probably really is. But I liked this chapter a lot, mostly because it had more of your original in it. Can't wait for number three, part three I mean lol
I'll give you critism- I think its cool you do it like episode for episode but like for me, I dont need to read EVERYTHING an episode has in it, I would much rather have more of your original stuff than the episode, it seems to take up half your chapter and honestly i just skip past it, I'm just encouraging to write more original than an episode synopsis.