Ouch. Those two disappearing on the same day must have been painful. In fact, it was. I experienced Abi's feelings right alongside her. That was a very good chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it, as I am thoroughly enjoying this story. Keep it up (:
First of all, I love the first chapter, and how you gave a taste of what we were walking into when we clicked on your story. It was a very good taste. And the last kiss they shared . . . wow. And in the next chapter, you introduce the main characters all in one and let us know what she thinks of them. Now, I'm going to the 3rd chapter
Very nice beginning Taigz, it's got me wanting more =P About your note, I believe it's definitely worth continuing. What English class you in this year? (I knew you were good at English already so I'm going to guess... 2!!!) 10/10 so far ; )