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  • ovaries;

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    it's a great story! but try to fix the grammar and spelling mistakes, just so it's easier to read.
    August 22nd, 2010 at 11:02pm
  • Lifelines

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    It's a good idea, but there are way too many spelling and grammer mistakes. And I agree with the girl above me, the font for the story is hard to read.
    August 22nd, 2010 at 06:43pm
  • Effing Perfect.

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    this is a really good story Im subscribing! but couuld you change the font for the story part please? it makes it so hard to read and I have to copy and paste it on a different page to read it n u would get so many more readers this way but i love the story(:
    August 22nd, 2010 at 07:53am
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