Camp Boulder - Comments

im lovin this more and more all the time. keep this up --it's great.
and update soon!

I love this story.
It's really well written, and it just seems... realistic. Your characters (Parker specifically) have great characterization. You really get a sense of their personality from what you've described them as.This story is also pretty damn unique, in its own way. I think that you're doing a great job of writing this - keep it up. :]
♥

Stone, Stone, Stone! ♥

I had been anticipating a fist fight after you mentioned them in your journal entry, you don't get this sort of action anywhere else!

ooh they almost kissed!!!
i lovvve the way u write cuz u make us all anticipate when they kiss
and ur a fking tease!!!

Okay i really like this, this is very refreshing! This isn’t like every other slash were the boys automatically like each other and are in love like right away! i like how this is slowly making its way to the big punch. and the side story is really there! xD i love it!
*subscribes*
Ahhhh i love Parker he’s funny and Stone would be the type girls like, no wonder 'hot girl' is obsessed with him ;D
More soon!

What photograph. said!
I love love love it! :)

OhMyGoshh.
They almost kissed then Prashant had to ruin it. Ugh.
But I loved that chapter.
Everything about this story is great, you never cease to amaze me! Haa.
I wonder how spending time with Junior will be...
Can't wait for more! :D

When I see this update in my inbox, I get really excited. Just thought I'd let you know :D
I pretty much love every aspect of this story. It really is amazing.

And you know what people say about overcompensation in the male ego…” I wiggled my pinkie.
After I read that I cried, great chapter, yet again:)
I love your updates!

I agree with Where Is My Mind? Only gay fiction worth reading!

Great update! :D

He probably spoke in simple sentences like, “Gideon hungry. Gideon want food. Gideon smash when angry.”

I actually just started laughing really hard. Idk why but I thought that was hysterical.
And Stone smiled! Progress is being made. Loved it!
Update soon(:

“Uh…everyone do what I did to Stone.” They gave me sort of weird looks. “With his hands,”

I laughed so hard at this.
Fucking hilarious.

Update soon?

It's good to know the green team can't win all the time. I liked the update.
;) jazzi

gasp! stone smiled!
:D <3

I knew they were going to get covered in mud :)
Anyways, great update!

I only noticed this little grammatical error:
So pulled his leg and he slid right in next to me.
You missed the I after 'so'.

i can edit if you want. ive got nothing better to do while im on break and all.

and i need something to distract me from the fact that england drew with usa. i mean seriously!?

This story is amazing!!! It's about SOCCER and I love soccer!!! :D haahaa You're an amazing writer!!! I hope to read more soooon... :D

I can't think of anything to say besides I like this story very much and you write very well.:D Please please please continue this cause a lot of us are expecting for more. :) One more thing I like this story cause it involves sports except that soccer isn't my thing, volleyball is. haha just sharing.

OMFG, YOU UPDATED!
I still love Stone, even if he was a jackass in this chapter. =D
Parker makes me smile and so does the lunch lady.
Keep updating!