I'm a Man - Comments

This was great, bb.

I'm speechless. Truly.
He emphasized his manliness so much and put so much importance in being the way he is, that it came as a massive shock when he and Paul did the dirty.
The repetitive nature was almost like a mantra. Reinforcing the fact that he's a man and he does manly things.
Brilliantly written erin. I always love your stories.

Wow.
Just, wow.
The entire thing, wow.

I love how I saw the end part coming, and it still surprised me.

Absolutely exceptional.

That was beautiful.
It was simple and poetic in a heavy haunting way.
I loved the narrative voice, I loved everything.
The whole thing just flowed together perfectly.
And just how you described everything.
It was perfect.

This was brilliant.
You described one type of man stereotype, and you did it so well.
I loved the repetition of being a man all throughout the story. It worked, and doesn't in a lot of stories.
All the description and development of your character was so flawless I was speechless.
You should so make another story called "I Am a Woman" or something. i think it'd be an amazing idea.

I actually loved this.
You described the essence of a man wonderfully.
Truthfully, as gross as it may be to some people.
I like my men hairy and buff and just...mmmm.
I love how he describes his wife as a prize.
That just made me like....>.<

But all in all, I very very much like this. XD

Well shit. You wrote another one that just made my jaw drop. T__T Fuck you, man.

No no, I be joking. I'm trying to find the right word to describe this, but in all honesty, I can't. I like how the main character emphasizes on the physical and mental aspects of being/acting like a man, then all of a sudden goes off into a bedroom with his friend.

I am a man.

When I read the first sentence, I had to laugh a little because... I dunno, I just did. You don't often find stories that start with a short, to-the-point sentence. I like that. Since it was in first person, it's easier to imagine what they're talking about or describing if they're clear about it, instead of just drawling on and on and on about what colour the sky was and how crunchy their cereal was that morning. Or... something.

But in short, this whole one shot is pure fucking gold, bby. I'm subscribing so I can read it again. :D