One Day in Your Life - Comments

I totally enjoyed and love ur story. I can't wait when u come back and update. Will this be continued? Update please :D

I'm a little confused...
In the previous chapter, Michael didn't know anything about the baby, and Janet found out, but then in the most recent chapter, Michael is a happy father?? What happened in between?

Awesome so far! :) Very brilliant and creative. :)

TEAM MICHAEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so im a SUPER HUGE MJ fan... have been since.. well forever... no joke even in elementary school at girl scouts EVERYONE knew that you DID NOT EVER say anything bad about michael in fron tof me unless u wanted a fist to the face.... (lol 1 lesson i'm still working on learning from him is anger management and killin them w/ love, but forcefulness is accomplishing my main goal for now though) anyway LOVE the story, but i would appreciate it and it might help just a tad if you mention int he summary how old michael is supposed to be at this time cuz we know it's past his teens and maybe in his early twenties cuz she dances to billie jean, but if he's like in his 40's and the girl sound like she's in her 20's (no offense to ppl who do this) but that's pretty creepy, but if he's closer to ehr age or if whe's closer to his then it's understandable... idk i guess i'm just saying that I would be able to get a better understanding for the story if the setting had a little more detail, on thing being their age, and maybe even if this is supposed to be taking palce present day or in that past... just a few things to consider

(sorry im a little long winded....)

that's cute :) But good thing she turned down Jermaine

Thanks for the comments(:

Fantastic! I like it so far. :)

It's good :) Just to keep your writing, do what I do before I post it, I copy and paste so if logs me out, I can log back in and not lose my work

This is really good so far. :) I like it.
And I hope the party will turn out fine for her, too.

Ooh, this is really great so far! I like it. :)

It's starting off good :D It'd be interesting to see how things start to develop for her

This sounds good so far! :) I like it. And I can't wait to read what happens next. :)