Dead Man's Land - Comments

I love how the plot came together at the end - this is really, really good, and I can't wait to read your other stories.
How you described the love in this is.. just... no words.

hectic :o
i love this ambiguity you're giving me, making me anxious ><

can't wait for mooore :):)

I Just About Cried At The End. Beautiful. Simply Beautiful. I Just Finished Watching Their Eyes Were Watching God, And Somehow this Reminds Me of The Book. Loved It! Wish It Never Ended.

this is just too good for words. I think you captured the entire thing absolutely incredibly. I mean, i'm not one for one shots, but this was something else entirely. I'm glad i'm reading this instead of studying for my physics final. As we say in Slovakia; Len Tak Dalej. =D

amazing. you're really good at writing!! ^___^

I just love how withing every two paragraphs the story was getting less ambigous by the second, it's really well written.

Good job!

OH.

This was just beautiful. Really sad but beautiful. It brought up a lot of imagery and I loved how you emphasised on some things. It is really different from your usual style though! But you captured Jeremiah's voice wonderfully, especially how he'd thought. I like Lacy as well.
Forgot to mention this: this one shot reminds me a lot of To Kill a Mockingbird for some reason :)

We still gotta respond with yessuh and nosuh and I dunno suh, and if you say anything else that’s even kinda outta line then you better be plannin’ on a good beatin’ heading your way.

THERE ARE NO WORDS
I LOVE THIS

like really really, i love this so much god god do i love this
i was like "wait what what wait" the whole frigging time, and i was just like dying on the inside because i totally love jeremiah and lacy already. this really was just amazing, and freaky good well written, and i just love it love it love it. like srs everything about it i just love.
love you. love this.
and your repetition of "can't, won't" throughout the one-shot
everything was just
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That was so amazing, I can't even put my feelings about it into words but it was so so good. Although the ending was sad, I think it was perfect. Wow, that's all I can say. Incredible!

That made me so anxious as I was reading it, I really don't know how to explain it better than that. I loved how the plot just sort of came together...like for the first few paragraphs I had no idea what was going on and then it just sort strung together.

Anyway, that was amazing. Definitely different, but amazing.