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I love this story! You should update again!

I loved this.
You can pull off cheesiness, and it's such a feel-good story.
The banner is gorgeous, and Jake's so sweet xD

Another great story, and the cheese in this is amazing, haha.

And the way you write is just amazing.

Oh, such a good ending for such a good story!
Loved it :D

Great update and ending<3

You did a fantastic job<3 :]

The cuteness has come to the end DX. Nooooo!
But i enjoyed it since I'm a sucker for anything that has cheese in it! x].
You should delve more into the cheesy story every once in a while. They truly make a good read XD.

Lots of loves go out to this stories. I will miss all that Jake G goodness! x}

Wash.it.all.away: Don't be jealous. XD

ahahahhaaa.
It's so fucking cheesey.
I love it. :)
It makes me
XD

She regarded at her own reflection in dismay and tried to sort herself out
I don't think the at needs to be there.

I just had to comment on that before I forgot. :)

Ahhh. Jake is so cruel for teasing that woman that way. But I loved this anyways. And God, every Jake story is dedicated to Billie. Lol she's turning everyone to Jake robot writers.

"Mae couldn't see any other reason for someone to be that toned, it was almost as if she was standing in the middle of the film 300."

Baby, I would love to be in that movie. It had some good looking people in it. :P

But yes, I did really like this. Wonderful description in the beginning. I got into the story quickly, and it was easier to stay focus since I was able to see the entire scene in my mind. Well done. I'm subscribing so I can read more later

i loved this.

it was really cute. :D

"Why don't you read between the lines"
AHHH
Love love love this! <3

I found silk tea's comment funny, because I said exactly the same thing (About Robert and Jake) to my mother when I read the chapter xD

Again, It's so sweet, and exciting. The reader is always on their toes, waiting for whatever you're going to throw at them next. I love it.

I do love cheesy stories :D

Its a good story, but I personally think its boring. its still creeping me out that he is 30 and make up artists are usually younger.....

I'm not a huge fan of the guy, but that really was nice. (: I like how she's all impatient and he's teasing her. It's obvious she doesn't really feel shit for him but hey, he can try, right?

Poor girl. If he was moving around that much for me, I'd slap him in the face.

This was awesome! You write amazingly. :D

I love all this playing hard to get xD
To be honest, it's faultless.
You describe the characters brilliantly and the dialouge is written with total genius.

I'm pretty sure that If I was Mae, I'd probably react the same way about the paparazzi's.

Awww, they kissed!! :D

Mmmm they kissed yay!

can't wait for more :]

HE KISSED MEEEEEEE.
*dies*
Oh dear lord I love the cheese.
Dude, Jake is in a movie with Robert? I need to see this pronto!