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  • Unpretty

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    Oh, wow, this is super cute!
    I love how the uniqueness of the piece... It's just so damn cute.
    You, my friend, have talent.
    Keep updating this, I'll be subscribing. :)
    June 11th, 2010 at 05:06am
  • saberhagen

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    "Every one love's a bit of Stilton!"
    ^ Hahahah. I love that Jonathan Ross interview!

    I like this story. Yes I do. *nods*
    Jake is a yummy, yummy man ;P can't wait for more!
    *subscribes*
    June 6th, 2010 at 06:32am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    Hahaha Gemma was teasing Mae, hehe cute update :]

    Can't wait for more :]
    June 6th, 2010 at 05:03am
  • go for gin.

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    This is great.
    I don't mind the slight cheesiness; it's very unique.
    I'm subscribing (:
    June 6th, 2010 at 02:18am
  • Thedanceingfrog

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    Please update!!!!
    June 6th, 2010 at 12:10am
  • silk tea.

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    No updates till Thursday?
    I think I might die. I'll have to resort to the raunchiest Jake Gyllenhaal story alive until you return. :(

    Oh, Gemma. I would probably go lesbian for her. XD
    June 5th, 2010 at 11:19pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    Cute update :]

    Can't wait for more :]
    June 5th, 2010 at 07:30am
  • Patty Lovell

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    I love it! xD
    super cute!
    It's just... so original!
    I can't believe how much talent you have! ;P
    June 5th, 2010 at 06:12am
  • Thedanceingfrog

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    Keep writing! I love this story!!!!!!!!!
    June 5th, 2010 at 04:00am
  • Skylight Madness

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    Still the cutest thing ever♥
    June 5th, 2010 at 03:17am
  • Fin du Fromage

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    Hehe, it's put a smile on my face that i can't wipe off.
    And it's knocked some awakedness into me x].
    And don't think i didn't notice the chapters were getting smaller.
    Sprinkle some more cheese into it!!! It's cute!!!! XD
    June 5th, 2010 at 02:57am
  • silk tea.

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    Cheese is the best. :)
    Especially when it's Jake.
    I imagine he'd be cheesy....and awesome, and then some dirtyness.
    All will be grand.
    Ahhhh. I love him.

    UPDATE AGAIN NOWOOWOOWOWO.
    June 5th, 2010 at 02:28am
  • Benjamin Barker

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    I don't think a story has ever made me drool as much as this.
    Cheesy, yet the guy is still hot.
    I love it!

    Muscles... Oh, the muscles.
    June 4th, 2010 at 09:17pm
  • Thedanceingfrog

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    Keep Going!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 4th, 2010 at 07:31pm
  • silk tea.

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    lmfao, oh I love the cheese.
    It's very true, I prefer my men ripped and hairy
    Rather than skinny and limp. XD

    I love this still. I'm waiting until I just jump him on his little chair. :Happy face
    June 4th, 2010 at 04:40pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    Just started reading this story and already loved it oh so much :]

    Can't wait to read more and find out what happens next :]
    June 4th, 2010 at 08:01am
  • alexander bernadotte

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    "Are you implying I have a flawless face?"
    ^ YESSS, OMFG!
    Chapter 2 was so damn adorkable (:
    "I'm a sucker for guys with muscles, what can I say?"
    ^ This made me squee. And yes, I'm also a sucker for guys with muscles <3
    This is so cute! This whole story, the concept, the everything.
    silk tea. should be proud ;D
    Lovely job! <333
    June 4th, 2010 at 07:31am
  • Skylight Madness

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    I'd have to agree with Lynnie Vicious
    this is just wayy to adorable

    ohhh and btw loved what you did with the last chapter on our story
    I literally had a tear.
    June 4th, 2010 at 07:14am
  • Skylight Madness

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    I'd have to agree with Lynnie Vicious
    this is just wayy to adorable

    ohhh and btw loved what you did with the last chapter on our story
    I literally had a tear.
    June 4th, 2010 at 07:14am
  • Lynnie Vicious

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    This is pretty freakin' adorable (:
    June 4th, 2010 at 06:54am
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