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I loved that last line :D

UPDATE >.<

It's so original, I love it! It's a point of view that's usually ignored when it comes to fanfiction, and all that jazz.

What can I say? You did an amazing job. You've made Jake so charming, and witty, and... Well, look at him, like that guy needs any more perfect dusted on his head! xD

I adore your writing style, and I shall subscribe.

I like your story and I can't wait for an update!!!!

MOREEEEEE. I could never work with celebrities, I would throw myselves at them.

I'm not big on Gyllenhaal, but this was just adorable.
<3

^. I still want to hump him, he just doesn't know it.

There's been all this talk of all these Jake stories in the journals, so I'm glad to finally read one.
I think it's so sweet that you wrote this for silk tea, and it's absolutely brilliant.
I love how Mae isn't automatically throwing herself all over Gyllenhaal, she just honestly wants to get her job done, but at the same time, she isn't denying that she's flattered over his behavior.
Great story, I 'd honestly like to read more of it =)

I would probably read this if you turned it into a story; it's very good.
I love how you described him, within sentences of him being introduced, I had a really vivid idea of him, likewise with Mae.
You described her well, I love her character.
Yes, will definitely be reading<3 :)

This is cute, if you do make it a story I'll be reading it (:

I love you.
Please, please continue this. I would love to read about myself being hit on by the next love of my life. Honestly though you've just made my life. I love the photo you used of him and I'm totally cool with my middle name being used.
Gah I worship you right now. Seriously. I want to say more but this is taking me forever to type out on my phone.

OH, hello there, cutie ;D
He sat obediently on the chair and stared at her through the mirror.
^ I'd stare at him too, but it's him staring at her so...
"Oh, you want to get away from me that badly?"
^ NO! O_O
This was awesomely written; very, very good job!
This = love <3