In the Shadow of Your Heart - Comments

I think this story is a great representation on how the less words used in a story the more powerful it becomes. You can either think that or not, but that's what I think.
It was just really beautiful and heartbreaking. The metaphors of the stars and space was gorgeous.

I'm sorry I'm not much of a commenter.

So after reading ''Dream's End'' I decided to go take a look at your other stories.

And woooooow. I loved thissss so much. So simple, so beautiful. The stars, the whole theme was a brilliant idea and the metaphors you used and everything is just right.

''Then you smashed the moon, and the stars all died.''

Perfect. I got goosebumps when I read that. So beautiful, and like the above comment reads; powerful. In 100 words you manage to give us a love story that went all wrong with the most beautiful imagery.

Yeah, you're pretty much talented. :

This was beautiful. You managed to convey so much in 100 words, and the last sentence was so powerful.

This is a rubbish comment, but I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed reading it. :)

Oh, wow. This is honestly one of the most unique, amazing things on Mibba right now. Of course, I clicked on the story because one, you wrote it, and you're a fabulous writer and I love you and two, I absolutely adore Florence + the Machine and recognized the lyrics right away.

I can tell you drew inspiration from Cosmic Love; it's really one of my absolute favorite songs of hers. Each of these ten word chapters were seriously magical. They seemed like song lyrics themselves, really. Your word choice was fantastic, for how little you had to go on. The language of this was just gorgeous. I don't think it's possible for me to relay through words how much I enjoyed reading this, or how utterly, utterly beautiful, it was. The ending took my breath away.

It really was fantastic.

This was really amazing. (:
But I couldn't help but picture aliens talking to each other. Hah.

Wow. This was incredible. I love the words you used, and the entire theme.
The end was outstanding.
Oh, and I love the layout, it fit the story well.
Amazing job.