If Only I Could Hate Him. - Comments

Usually I don't like HP stories but that was one was pretty good, my only peice of criticism would be the layout colours; they're just a bit loud for my liking (but that's just me being picky.)

This is really interesting.
I don't really like HP stories but this was pretty stellar.

And I'm sorry it took so to judge your story; I've been a little busy, mixed with forgetfulness.. x)
The layout was readable – so that was good,
but there were some awkward spots in the story.
Like how it jumped between the first and second chapter.
Also, I thought it was a 4-shot?
If so, I'm just judging on these three because the deadline is far over due.
I did like how you did your take on this part of the story.
It was nice to get more into Ginny and Dean's head.
You did a pretty good job. :)

Yes, I agree with the other commenters.
You should make this into a story. And if you do, I'm sure I will read more then just the first 5 chapters (:
Ginny is awesome. I love her.
And the two different pov's from the lovers...
Amazing. I really liked this.

I love it. Harry Potter is one of my favorite series of all time and putting it in Ginny's point of vew makes it a lot better. Keep up the good work

I think you should put in a second chapater and make it into a story.
It's really good keep writing. I'll subscribe.

Interesting first chapter. I like how you changed point of veiws in it.

i love it .... keep writing ... i am subscribing ! update soon !