Forbidden Love, Hidden Lust - Comments

AAH thank you thank you thank you :) ive been waiting for months and months for the next chapter lol its the bessssst story :)

what happened to the other writer? i'll help if you want

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I completely and utterly love this. PLEASE RIGHT MORE!!!

Don't worry, you're a good writer.Can't wait for more, lolz

I love this story!!!!!!

oo brian knows

Aww, Brian is being understanding. At least they have someone one their side when it comes to their relationship
Hm, it's kinda understandable that Zay's cringing at the thought of her relationship with her 'brother'.
But they are only related by name. They don't have any blood relation what so ever
Maybe that'll come to their minds and they don't care about it any longer
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you two update soon :)

damn....this story's gonna get more interesting now,lol,more soon? lozl

Aww, I wanted to cry ):
Brian can't tell anyone! Ay ya ya.
Zacky and Zay are cute together! :D
Great updateeeee (:
Update soooon, <3

lol i reckon u should have her like miss a period then she'll hyperventilate and think she's pregnant but its a false alarm haha. and the guys should like walk in on them lol. love it update soon!!!!

zacky's pms ing

well as i have said already :) this is one of the best stories i have ever[!!!!!!] read!! and i honestly think you guys will do an amzing job of putting together the next chapter :) !!!! i dunno what should happen next.....new character maybe....maybe more jealousy or another attraction between of the characters and someone else....i dont know!!! lol. but i DO know that which ever way you guys choose to go, it willl be A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!!!

That was really awesome :)
Really steamy........
Haha, but as for your question, I think that someone from the guys finds out about them
That would cause total drama
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

YES! Another update :D

I liked this chapter, kept my attention. BUT PLEASE. Do not get her pregnant. D:
I hate that in stories. But I'm just sayingggg.

But I'm happy you guys updated again :D

ohhh snap Zacky got laid oh yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love it guys..... its so steamy

Loved the update. =) Very good.

wonder how shocked the parents woulda been if they walking in on 'em,0.o.., that chapter reminded me that maybe he was day dreaming, but idk,more soon? lol

Oooo, good chapter. I'm glad they made up. And wtf @ Zack choking Brian. Ahaha, that made my day.

This story is progressing very well, I'm enjoying it! (: Maybe some action in the next chapter? -waggles eyebrows- Ahaha, wellll. I'll be waiting for the nexxt update.

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I AM TOTALLLY LUHVING THIS STORYYYYYY!!!!!! AMAZING!!!!!!!