In the Stars - Comments

This was great and I love any Harry Potter stories(:

Absolotly great! :D
I really, really liked it!
Thank you so much for being in my contest. XD
But, it was very good! :)

This was great, I really enjoyed reading it. Your imagery was amazing, some of the best I've read in a while. hannahsmitesmeese seems to have got you on your grammar. But that wasn't really a big deal, that's a difficult rule to follow. Keep posting. I want to see where this goes :)

<3 Robyn

You're an awesome writer.
I loved this.
This is one of the few good HP fanfics I've read

HABLAHBLAH
I love it
Just like I love the rest of your stuff x3
Your writing is so...abstract, but it keeps to the point. It's really hard to describe, but it's YOUR style, and not anyone elses.
I ADORE your description of Tonks in the dream. It's so wonderfully written, and beautiful, and original. Thats something I don't find a lot, are original descriptions. They all seem to sound the same, but this was just...wow. Especially the bit about her eyes. Gah. Just amazing.
I didn't really see anything that needed to be fixed....
~Icamane

One thing I noticed is that you didn't have a link to the contest. Which in the rules it states you should have. But I do love the layout; it's simple. :}
You had a few errors in the content, but it wasn't something too noticeable.
He knows he’s in his own body; there’s no full moon, in fact there is no moon at all.
The “in fact...” part of the sentence after the semi-colon makes it a comma splice.
But I really loved the detail in the story.
I could really feel as If I was watching it happen before my very eyes.
Great job, love. <3 And I'm sorry it took so to judge your story; I was waiting until it was closer to the deadline. x)

wow! I really Liked that!