Yay! You put up a new chapter! :D And as always I enjoyed it, though I'd like to see more of Damon since I'm a big fan of him. But I also like Chris and the way you write his character. I feel like this chapter was the conclusion to the first part of the story, introducing the characters and the situation. I'm looking forward to reading the next part where the characters now have to make their plans and figure out how to resolve their issues. I hope the next chapter will be up soon!
June 12th, 2012 at 11:43pm