The Twelfth Night Game - Comments

I liked this.
It was different than other things I've read.

haha, that was amusing :D
And it wasn't the usual amusing that most people do, like they try too hard to make it funny and it doesn't work. But your humor worked, I dearly wish I could get away with this at my school :P
I was really curious about this story because it had 12th Night in the title XD That was my school's latest play.
My only suggestion would be to clean up the beginning a little more so we can understand all the crazy stuff better :)
~Icamane

Oh what a mess!
I had fun reading this. Great ideas, but they didn't really work out . . .
Gees, I wish my school did things like that.
Darts, Balloons, CAKES!!
Anyhoo, I had fun reading this.
I liked how you put it in diary form instead of the usual.
It was refreshing (:
Good luck in the contest!