Fireworks - Comments

  • alexander bernadotte

    alexander bernadotte (125)

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    First, the layout is absolutely adorable! It doesn't distract and the picture is really pretty (: Second, I like how your character is different; how he hides himself from the fireworks and is scared of them. Like silk tea. said, it sort of raises the emotional level on it and makes the character seem much more real.
    Anyways, this is very, very unique and and I truly enjoyed reading this. Lovely job! <3
    September 11th, 2010 at 07:58pm
  • silk tea.

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    Dude, this is so me. I'm forced to watch Fireworks all the time and I find them so boring.
    I'm not afraid of them, but like your character, the noise scares me shitless.
    I love how it's kind of on an emotional level the way you describe his fear and how he hides himself from them.
    But it's just fireworks. Very unique, and very well done.
    August 7th, 2010 at 11:09pm