You're My Everything - Comments

DAUMN.
You threw me through a loop there, I was like "ZOMG SHES GONNA BE FAQIN TOMMEH!"
But she didn't.
Which is quite odd for Tommy... BUT SHE AND MICK NEED TO BANG, DAMMIT.
Understa--Hey, Motley Crue just came up on my iPod....
ANYWAYS
They need to bang.
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Kinky Sex mwahahahahaha :)

love the updateee(:

i'm surprised tommy didn't jump at the opportunity to have sex with her. he usually probably would. but who knows.... that actually might be kind of sexy..... cuz tommy is sexy anyways......

sorry ranting a little..... update soon? i hope so.

not a waste XD I love it

amazing chapters!I(:
and that picture is SOOOO amazing. i have that pictureee.
and they totally would be a hot gay couple (terror twins 4 lyfeee)

defff update soon. and i totally think that darian shud have a thing w/ tommy that'd be adorable.

I liked it. Mucho.
Vince and Nixx are brats. But they're cute brats.
Keep it coming<3

I'm glad my last comment could be your inspiration. xD Love ya!
The new chapter was good! I loved it!
Poor Mick, cutting his feet up in the potty room. :[ Oh well. THAT'S WHAT YOU GET FOR BREAKING THE MIRROR YOU DUMB DRUNK!
But it was hilarious. :D Can't wait for the next update!

I DIDN'T SEE ANY SEX IN THERE, MISSY!

But again, you always make it so mysterious. I love that lol it keeps me wanting more and on edge.
A wait this will be :)
I like how quickly this update came haha
......I could make so many sexual jokes about that.

WELL DONE, YOU! :D

DAMMIT HAILEY.
I WANTED TO READ ABOUT SOME RACY SEX!
You sneaky bastard.

I loved it:)
I love the little....mind games they seem to be playing with each other.
You keep throwing us curve balls, missy, but I love it.

ANYWAYS. Keep it comin.

WHICH IS WHAT DARIAN BETTER BE SAYING WHEN SHE AND MICK HAVE SOME RAUNCHY SEX.

AH, I LOVED THE DIALOGUE! It was the fucking funniest thing I've read in a long time. :D
AND DAMN YOU, I WANTED THEM TO END UP FUCKING!
I wanted Mick to rip his pants off and crawl into bed, pressing his dick against her ass and whispering naughty things in her ear before giving it to her fast and hard! I WANT HIM TO BONE HER TILL SHE BLEEDS!
Ah, you're torturing us all, Hailey. :D You really are! More soon!

Ooooh I LOVE This!!! Can't wait for more!!!

awww.
poor mick!
emi was stupid. i remember the dirt mentioning her.
update soon!(:

you make Mick seem the cutest person in the whole entire world, as I'm sure he is. :)

The Terror Twins know a hoe when they see one.
They've done pleanty xD
But I love it!
You threw us a nice little curve ball there, you clever girl.

IDEMANDMORE!
<3

Mick Mars is the shit! i like this story! Awesome Job!

I really love the layout of this story. It's so compact and sturdy and yet still artistic.
I know that sounds really weird and random, but yeahhh... xD

I loved reading the first part of this because of the obvious attention to reality.
You really know how to make things believable, and that is absolutely needed.

Your use of dialogue could be improved, and I noticed you have a bit of trouble with commas.
But other than that it was brilliant. <3

So -
Starting with the layout; I like it, really. (: It's nice, and not too over the top.
The title is cool, too. Simple, but - I think I might've heard it, before. o.o Probably not. Just sounds common.
But starting with the first chapter, one of the first lines set me off. I rolled my eyes men! Wait... WHAT?! That makes no sense, hon. And it was a complete turn off.

For the rest of the chapter, I was looking for incorrect things.
So by the time I was done with the chapter one, it wasn't enough to make me want read more.
Sorry, doll. ):

Those three make me smile with how silly they are X)

:( poor Mick though…

Aw, poor Mick. :[
That's so sad! Emi, that fucking skank!
Hopefully Darian will make Micky all better! :D
Great update.
More soon!

wow.
that's rough for her.
i think she's gonna like either vince or nikki. (:
cuz nikki is just sexy(: