Zero Lies - Comments

This is really quite good. I like the way you've personified her into a real character, which makes her more likeable. She's not, y'know, shallow like most characters are.

Your wordcraft is amazing and everything flows really well. I like it.

Holy crap that girl's annoying. She made me want to bite all the shit out of my pillow. Good job on making a character like that (for real, not a lot of people's characters make me wanna do that kind of thing). You did a great job portraying her and the other characters. I like this.

love it! (>^_^)> when will you continue?

I really feel sorry for her.

Love the update
I can't help but smile at her :)

I like the idea of this so far.
I've never read a story with this plot line so...