It All Leads to One Thing - Comments

Hey , I really like this ! It's a nice original and it's really creative ! ((:

Oxo-Morgie<3

I really think this idea is good. It's original.
I must admit, I had forgotten about this story. I've read everything again, and yup... still like it. :]

This seems interesting (:
I like it already.

I love this. The description and prologue were really wonderful, but I really loved the first story itself. I love the way you write! It's so amazing and flows really great, with the perfect amount of additives like adjectives and such. :D Love this!

That was very sweet. I often find it hard to start a romance, because it all seems to have been done before. But when you state that yes, it's love, and it has been done before, you make it poetic and original and somehow, I still want to read on.

"They could be anyone, even you, because everyone deserves love, because everyone will experience love."

This is an incredible idea. ^_^
The prologue was extreamly well written.

Aww! This was such an adorable idea. The picture and layout are so freakin' cute <3 The details are wonderful as well (:
Lovely job! <3

I like your simple details. (:
I'm seriously hoping you update this soon.
It's such a lovely idea. C: <3

I also really liked the picture and the layout.
Very nice touches to an already stunning story.

I love it. I really do.
The prolouge was really simple and repetive but that made it amazing. =D
The second chapter was amazing too =D I'm lookiing forward to this.
I have a feeling it'll be really popular

I absolutely loved the prolouge.
The only thing I think you need to watch is the way Tyler talks. You need to remember that he's a fifteen or sixteen year old boy, at one point (I forget the line he said exactly) he sounded a lot older.
Other than that I really enjoyed this.
Keep it up =]

I loved the prologue. I found it really cute and inspiring.
I don't find any of the characters stereotypical, but that's just me, dear. ^.^
More soon?
I think this'll be popular. You're talented.
<3
Megan

I reallly like this story! *subscribes* More???

Wow. Interesting.

Tyler is stereotypical. That's the only negative.

You write wonderfully as a girl. As a boy...not so much.

I liked this a lot, though.

This idea is so awesome, that's the only way to describe it. I love, love, love this story so far, and the prologue was really just...just perfect. The way you write is just breath-taking. I'll be sticking around for more.

See, this update was amazing!
Ashley is from my homeland? And Tyler sounds like quite the character.

Why haven't you continued this?! :|
Makes me frustrated, deary.

I like where this is going so far and I really like your prolouge. I'ma subscribe for more =)
-Katie

The idea sounds amazing.
And I actually like how the prologue is so repetitive.
It gives it a sort of building-up feel, like anticipation.
Looove it. <3

I cannot wait to continue this, it seems to be very interesting.
From what I can tell, you're quite a talented writer.
I love the idea for this, and I know it will be very popular. (:

I agree with the people
it indeed does look interesting
and even more than that
and I want more
I want more of your stories in general
and I can't wait to read more